rakeria's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[punch on]

Yeehaw

Im giving you a good score cus you topped my first flash m8 ; )

Keep it up...
but for the case of learning more till next time here we go...
It was kinda stiff,had some smooth movements briefly in some parts.. No objections against how you draw sticks,but they need to have smooth bodies.
The time you should use each frame should be what you use to create one anim like this one...

Make more : )

owaka2 responds:

hahahaha thx dude ile continue the flash andh make it way more awesome and hopefully make some more flashes

[RFOD P1 (better Version)]

Well it looks good

even though ur new to animation.

PenCapChew89 responds:

Thanks dude

[hitch hikers guide]

Weeeeeelllllll

There was moving stars and music with a number with no relation to the name and a sign that advice you not to panic...
Im sorry but I think you can do better ; )

mikkim responds:

Umm... 42 is the answer to life the universe and everything, which is a question in the universe of hitch hikers guide to the galaxay, and DON'T PANIC is something in hitchhikers guide, with a relation I don't know of.

[Conversation 2: Stickmen]

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Stop with those comics make an animation instead and improve yer drawing skills

superuber responds:

drawings, yeah
ican do that
but wait for tomarrow, ill submit the other 2 episodes

and, sorry to disappoint you, but i suck at animation

at least my comics pass judgement

[Conversation 1: Balls]

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Dude,that looked wierd.Try to make them move their mouths ^^

superuber responds:

it looks weird because i want this to get in the Experiemental collection.
and this is supposed to be a comic without animation, but i couldnt do that.

i fell like if i didnt put those animations in there, this would've been blammed

oh yeah, and if you're reading this, please pm me how high you voted on this.

[sk8motion]

Cool

It was good if you make these changes:
Higher FPS
Try to make his arms shake a mini bit just not stay there they are+make the arms follow the current gravity all the time e.x. when he jumps from a high place
Practise
never give up
Never be a flamer here

If you follow these things it should be great
I am not a flamer myself so all these things writed up there is just there to help you,not insult you

smps responds:

ok thanks for the advice